The short version is by hand. Wallace drafted his fiction and essays in longhand before anything went near a keyboard, and he revised each page far more than most readers would guess.
Longhand, in Pencil and Pen
Wallace worked the same way for years. He filled spiral notebooks by hand, in pencil and pen, then transcribed the pages onto a computer once a passage held its shape. He said the slowness was the point. Typing was faster, and speed was exactly what he didn't want when he was trying to think. The first two or three drafts, by his own account, were always longhand.
Revision was where most of the work happened. His typescripts at the University of Texas carry corrections in different colored inks, one color per pass, so you can watch him go back over the same page again and again. He wrote much of Infinite Jest this way in the early-to-mid 1990s, starting the novel in 1991 and handing a draft to his editor by the end of 1993.
The Footnotes Were a Choice
The endnotes in Infinite Jest and the footnotes in his essays weren't decoration. Wallace used them on purpose, to break a linear text into something closer to how he felt modern life actually arrives, in fragments and interruptions. He explained the thinking to Charlie Rose in 1997.
There's a way that it seems to me reality's fractured right now, at least the reality that I live in.
David Foster Wallace, Charlie Rose interview, 1997
Read the full David Foster Wallace writing routine for how the drafting and revising fit with his teaching years.
What You Can Steal
- Draft by hand when you're stuck. The slower pace forces you to watch the sentence form.
- Treat the first draft as raw material. Wallace expected to rewrite, so a rough page never scared him.
- Mark each revision pass separately. A fresh color or a fresh file per pass shows what you've already fixed.
- Use structure on purpose. If a footnote or a jump serves the reader, keep it; if it only shows off, cut it.