True Crime

Things I've Noticed About True Crime Writing

Kia Orion | | 5 min read

A few things I've noticed about true crime writing, from reading too much of it and trying to understand why some of it stays with you.


The best true crime techniques have almost nothing to do with the crime itself. The crime is the reason people pick the book up. The writing is the reason they finish it. Most of the craft happens in the parts that don't involve blood or courtrooms or mug shots. It happens in how the writer renders a neighborhood, or a marriage, or the particular silence of a family that stopped talking about something decades ago.


Robert Kolker structured Lost Girls around the five women who were killed by the Long Island Serial Killer. He spent years interviewing their families, reconstructing their lives before they became headlines. The book barely mentions the killer. Kolker made a choice that most true crime writers won't make: he decided the victims were more interesting than the person who hurt them. And he was right.


Pacing in true crime works differently than in fiction. In a novel, you can build tension by withholding information. In true crime, the reader often already knows the outcome. The tension has to come from somewhere else. Usually it comes from understanding. You already know someone dies. What you don't know is how ordinary everything was the morning before.


There's a version of true crime writing that treats real people like characters in a thriller. You can always tell when a writer is doing this because the descriptions get cinematic. The killer's eyes are "cold." The victim was "full of life." These are signs that the writer has stopped reporting and started performing.


Jon Krakauer does something in Under the Banner of Heaven that I think about often. He writes himself into the investigation. You can feel him forming opinions, changing his mind, getting angry at certain institutions. Most journalists are trained to stay invisible. Krakauer walks right into the frame. It makes the book feel less like a report and more like a conversation with someone who can't stop thinking about what he found.


One true crime writing tip that nobody frames as a tip: the research is the writing. In almost every strong true crime book I've read, you can feel the volume of material behind each paragraph. The sentences are lean, but the filing cabinet is enormous. The writer chose these three details out of three hundred. You can sense the weight of everything they left out.


Sarah Koenig said something during Serial that stuck with me. She was talking about the case against Adnan Syed, and she said, "I don't know if he did it. I really don't know." That admission did more work than any dramatic reveal could have. She let the uncertainty stand, and the audience leaned in further because of it, not in spite of it.


True crime that ages well almost always treats the legal system as a character in the story. Not a backdrop, not a setting. A character with motives and flaws and blind spots of its own.


I'm not entirely sure why the podcast format worked so well for true crime. Part of it is intimacy. A voice in your headphones feels closer than words on a page. But I think the bigger reason is that podcasts unfold over time and true crime is fundamentally a story about time, about what gets remembered and what gets lost and how long it takes for the truth to surface, if it surfaces at all.


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Maggie Nelson's The Red Parts is about the 1969 murder of her aunt Jane Mixer, a case that was reopened decades later. What makes the book remarkable is that Nelson doesn't pretend to have journalistic distance. She's inside the story. She's the victim's family. And she uses that position to ask questions that an outside reporter couldn't ask, or wouldn't think to ask, like what it does to a family's sense of time when a murder stays unsolved for thirty years.


The difference between good true crime and exploitative true crime often comes down to one question: who benefits from this being told? If the answer is only the writer and the audience, something is off.


Dialogue in true crime is tricky because you're working from transcripts, interviews, and court records, and real people don't talk in clean, dramatic sentences. The writers who handle this well tend to use less dialogue, not more. They paraphrase. They summarize. They save the direct quotes for the moments that actually need the reader to hear the exact words.


A short observation: the opening of a true crime piece matters more than in almost any other genre. You're asking the reader to spend hours with real suffering. The first paragraph is where they decide if they trust you enough to go there.


I've noticed that the strongest true crime writers are comfortable with loose ends. They don't wrap things up neatly. They don't manufacture closure that didn't exist in life. Koenig ended Serial still uncertain. Nelson ended The Red Parts with more questions than she started with. The willingness to leave the reader unsettled is, I think, a form of honesty that the genre needs more of.


Structure in true crime usually falls into one of two patterns: chronological (this happened, then this, then this) or thematic (here's one lens on the case, here's another, here's a third). The chronological approach is easier to follow. The thematic approach is harder to pull off but tends to produce more interesting work, because it forces the writer to make an argument about why the crime matters beyond the facts of what occurred.


The true crime technique that gets overlooked most often is restraint. Knowing what not to include. Knowing which details are gratuitous and which ones are doing real work. The reader doesn't need to see everything the writer saw in the case file. They need to see exactly enough to understand, and not one detail more.


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Kia Orion

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