True Crime

How to Write True Crime (When the Story Is Already Real)

Kia Orion | | 5 min read

In November 1959, Truman Capote read a 300-word item in the New York Times about the murder of a family in Holcomb, Kansas. Herb Clutter, his wife, their two teenage children. Shotgun. No apparent motive. Capote clipped the article, called his editor at The New Yorker, and said he wanted to go to Kansas. He brought Harper Lee with him because he knew a small town wouldn't open up to a man like him alone.

He stayed six years. He interviewed the killers extensively after their arrest. He attended their execution. He claimed total recall and never used a tape recorder, which meant every conversation in In Cold Blood was reconstructed from memory and notebook scribbles, sometimes hours after the fact. The book, published in 1966, was called the first "nonfiction novel." It made him famous in a way his earlier fiction never had.

It also ended him. He never finished another novel. He drank. The people who knew him said Kansas broke something in him, that spending years inside a murder and then watching the men he'd come to know hang from a rope was not something you could metabolize and move on from.

That's the thing about true crime writing that doesn't get discussed enough. The story is already real. The people are already dead. And that changes everything about how you write it.


The Research Will Try to Consume You

Michelle McNamara understood this. She ran a blog called TrueCrimeDiary.com and spent years tracking the serial predator she named the Golden State Killer. She built databases, cross-referenced case files, drove to crime scenes decades after the fact and walked the routes he might have taken. She died in 2016, before she could finish the book. I'll Be Gone in the Dark was completed by her researcher and a journalist colleague. Two months after publication, the Golden State Killer was identified and arrested, partly because McNamara's work had brought new attention to the case.

There's a passage in the book where she describes lying awake at night, mentally walking through a victim's house, trying to figure out which window he came through. She's not doing this for a plot point. She's doing it because she can't stop.

If you're writing true crime, you'll hit a version of this. Maybe not that extreme. But the material has weight in a way that fiction doesn't, because you can't change the ending and you can't un-know what the documents tell you. The discipline isn't just about putting in enough research hours. It's about knowing when to step back from the case files and remember that you're writing a book, not solving a crime.


Go to the Place

David Grann's Killers of the Flower Moon is about the systematic murders of Osage Nation members in 1920s Oklahoma. Members of the Osage had become wealthy from oil rights on their land, and white settlers, many of them married into Osage families, started killing them for the money. Dozens of people. Maybe hundreds. The full count has never been established.

Grann could have written the book from archives alone. The primary documents exist, the FBI files, the court records, the newspaper coverage from the time. But he went to Osage County. He talked to descendants. He sat in the rooms where the decisions were made and drove the roads where the bodies were found.

There's something that happens when you're physically present in a place where real events occurred. The distances become real. You understand that the Clutter farmhouse was isolated in a way that a map doesn't convey, that the Osage hills are vast and quiet in a way that makes you understand how people disappeared without anyone raising an alarm for weeks. Grann's book has a texture that comes from those visits, a specificity you can't get from reading alone.

I'm not sure every true crime project requires this. Sometimes the location is gone, or the case is too recent, or access is genuinely impossible. But when you can go, you should. The place will tell you things the documents won't.

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You Owe the Dead More Than a Good Story

This is where true crime writing gets complicated in a way that other nonfiction doesn't. You're writing about people who were killed. Those people have families. Those families have feelings about how their loved ones are depicted.

Capote was criticized for his closeness to Perry Smith. Some readers felt he'd romanticized the killer, given him an inner life that functioned almost like sympathy. Capote's defenders argued that understanding a killer isn't the same as excusing one. I don't think the argument has been settled.

What I do think is that the writer's obligation runs in one direction first: toward the victims. If your true crime writing spends more time making the killer interesting than making the victims real, something has gone wrong with your priorities. McNamara was good at this. She kept returning to the people the Golden State Killer had hurt, their names, their lives before the crime, what was taken from them. The killer was a problem to be solved. The victims were people to be remembered.


The Form Demands That You Be Honest About What You Don't Know

Capote claimed total recall. Most scholars now believe he fabricated or embellished significant portions of In Cold Blood, including conversations he couldn't possibly have witnessed. The book works as literature. Whether it works as journalism is a different question.

The best true crime writers since Capote have been more transparent about the gaps. Grann is careful to signal when he's speculating, when the record goes silent, when the full truth of what happened to certain Osage victims will probably never be known. That honesty doesn't weaken the book. It makes it more trustworthy, which in true crime writing is the thing you can't afford to lose.

If you don't know how a conversation went, say so. If the evidence supports three possible interpretations, present them. If the case has holes that will never be filled, let the reader sit with that discomfort rather than papering over it with confident narration. True crime readers are sophisticated. They can handle ambiguity. What they can't handle, what erodes their trust fast, is the feeling that you're making things up and passing it off as fact.


I keep coming back to Capote in Kansas, six years into a project that was supposed to take a few months. He went there to write a magazine piece about how a small town responds to violence. He ended up writing the defining book of his career and losing himself in the process.

That's the particular weight of true crime writing. You don't get to invent the stakes. They were there before you showed up with your notebook and your half-formed idea about what kind of book this might be. Your job is to honor what actually happened, to tell it with the care and honesty that real victims deserve, and to come back from the material in one piece if you can.

If you're writing real cases, having that daily anchor helps.

If you're writing real cases, having that daily anchor helps.

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Kia Orion

Author of The Writer's Daily Practice, the #1 Bestselling book in Journal Writing and Writing Skills. He writes a free daily reflection for writers.

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