Free Writing

How to Free Write When You Don't Know What to Say

Kia Orion | | 5 min read

In 1973, a composition teacher at MIT named Peter Elbow published a slim book called Writing Without Teachers. The premise was almost absurdly simple: sit down and write for ten minutes without stopping. Don't cross anything out. Don't pause to think. If you run out of things to say, write "I have nothing to say" until something else comes. That's it.

The book didn't land the way you'd expect. Academics mostly ignored it. The writing establishment at the time was obsessed with outlining, with structure, with getting your thesis statement right before you typed a single word. Elbow was saying the opposite: skip all that. Write first. Think later. He wasn't being provocative for the sake of it. He'd struggled to write for years himself, had nearly dropped out of graduate school over it, and had come to believe that the traditional advice (know what you want to say before you say it) was the exact thing making writers freeze.

The book sold slowly at first, then steadily, then for decades. It's still in print. And the method he described, free writing, became one of those rare techniques that actually works for almost everyone who tries it, including people who are sure they have nothing to write about.

How to Free Write: Start with the Sentence You're Afraid Is Too Boring

The biggest misconception about how to free write is that you need a spark. Some flash of feeling or a half-formed idea. You don't. The whole point is to begin without one.

Natalie Goldberg, who wrote Writing Down the Bones, used to tell her students to start with "I remember" or "I'm thinking about" and then keep the pen moving no matter what. She compared it to running. The first few minutes feel terrible. Your legs are stiff, your breathing is off, and you're convinced you should've stayed in bed. But if you keep going, something loosens.

So here's what that looks like in practice. You sit down. You write: "I don't know what to write about today. The coffee is cold and I keep looking at my phone." And then you keep going. Maybe the next sentence is about why you keep looking at your phone. Maybe it's about the weather. Maybe three paragraphs in, you're writing about your mother. You didn't plan that. You didn't outline it. It just showed up because you gave it room to.

The Ten-Minute Version That Actually Works

I'm genuinely unsure why, but ten minutes seems to be the magic number. Longer sessions don't produce better material. Elbow said ten minutes. Goldberg said ten minutes. Dorothea Brande, who was writing about this method back in the 1930s in Becoming a Writer, told people to write for fifteen or twenty minutes first thing in the morning, before they were fully awake, before the rational mind had time to start editing.

An hour of free writing sounds ambitious and disciplined but what usually happens is you burn through the useful stuff in the first ten minutes and then spend the remaining fifty performing, trying to write something good, which defeats the entire exercise.

Set a timer. When it goes off, stop. Even mid-sentence. Especially mid-sentence, actually, because it means you'll have somewhere to pick up tomorrow.

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What to Do When the Page Stays Blank

Sometimes you sit down and the page stays blank. The timer is running and you're just staring. This happens. It happens to people who've been writing for thirty years.

William Stafford had a good answer for this. Someone once asked him what he did when he couldn't write, and he said: "I lower my standards." He meant it literally. If you can't write something interesting, write something boring. Write something false if you have to. A single word counts. The blank page wins only when you refuse to put bad words on it.

The other thing that helps is writing about the blankness itself. "I'm sitting here and nothing is coming and I feel stupid" is a sentence. It's on the page now. You're writing. And nine times out of ten, the next sentence will be about why you feel stupid, or what "stupid" even means to you, or something your dad said once that stuck in a way you didn't notice until just now.

When Free Writing Exercises Turn into Real Drafting

Here's where free writing gets sneaky. You do it enough mornings in a row and you start to notice that some of what you're producing is actually, well, usable. A sentence here. A paragraph there. An observation that surprises you.

Anne Lamott calls first drafts "shitty first drafts" in Bird by Bird, and free writing is even shittier than that, which is what makes it useful. You're writing below the threshold of judgment. And below that threshold, odd things happen. You stumble into honesty. You say things you didn't know you thought.

The trick is to go back the next day and read what you wrote with a pen in hand. Circle anything that catches your eye. One circled sentence from a ten-minute free write can become the seed of an essay, a chapter, a whole project. Most of it you'll throw away. That's fine. You were never supposed to keep it all.


The daily practice of writing, the real one, the one that actually builds over months and years, usually looks like this: ten minutes of free writing, a cup of coffee, and the willingness to write badly. That's the whole thing. I keep thinking there should be more to it, some secret that experienced writers know, but the ones I've read and the ones I've talked to all say roughly the same thing. You show up. You write. Most of it is garbage. And then one morning, between the garbage, something real appears.

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Kia Orion

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