Writing Voice

What Developing a Writing Voice Actually Looks Like

Kia Orion | | 5 min read

Some observations about developing a writing voice, gathered from years of paying too much attention to how sentences work:


Voice isn't something you build. It's something that's already there, buried under all the habits you picked up trying to sound like a proper writer. The work is removal.

You can hear Kurt Vonnegut in a single sentence. That flat, midwestern delivery. The way he'd say something devastating and then follow it with "So it goes." He didn't develop that voice. He just stopped disguising it.

Most people who are "searching for their voice" are actually searching for permission.

I've noticed that writers tend to find their voice faster in emails and text messages than in manuscripts. There's something about the absence of an imagined audience that strips away performance. The trick, if there is one, is to write your essays with the same looseness you'd write a note to a friend who already gets you, and then tighten from there rather than the other way around.

Read Raymond Carver's early drafts, before Gordon Lish edited them down to bone. Then read the published versions. It's genuinely hard to say which voice is "Carver's." The stripped versions are the ones we remember, but the longer drafts feel warmer, more human. I go back and forth on whether Lish found Carver's voice or replaced it with something better. I honestly don't know the answer.

Voice is rhythm before it's content.

Joan Didion wrote in "Why I Write" that she was "not a thinker" but someone who needed images, pictures, to find out what she meant. Her voice came from that limitation. She wrote around the edges of things because she couldn't get at them directly, and that circling became the most recognizable style in American nonfiction.

One way to test if you're developing a voice: read a paragraph you wrote six months ago. If it sounds like you, you're getting somewhere. If it sounds like it could've been written by anyone in your MFA cohort, you're still performing.

People confuse voice with vocabulary. A big vocabulary gives you range but says nothing about who you are on the page. Hemingway proved that with about 200 words.

"If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it." That's Elmore Leonard. And he's describing the entire project of developing a writing voice in eight words.

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Your voice gets clearer when you stop reading only writers you admire and start reading writers who annoy you. The irritation teaches you what you'd never do, which is surprisingly useful information.

There's a phase, and it lasts years, where your voice sounds like a bad impression of whoever you read last. This is fine. This is the whole process. Every writer you absorb becomes compost.

Toni Morrison's sentences sound like no one else who has ever written in English. You can open any of her novels to a random page and know within three lines that it's her. That kind of distinctiveness wasn't calculated. It came from decades of writing toward what she heard internally, a music that was specific to her history, her ear, her refusal to translate herself for a white audience.

Developing a writing voice looks, from the outside, like a person sitting in a chair typing the same kind of thing over and over for a long time. From the inside, it feels like slowly turning up the volume on a frequency you could always barely hear.

Most writing advice about voice tells you to "be authentic." That's useless. Authenticity on the page is a technical achievement. It requires knowing which details to include, where to break a line, when to let a sentence run and when to cut it short. Sounding like yourself is a skill you practice, the same way a musician practices until the instrument disappears.

Your voice will change. Let it. The writer you are at forty won't sound like the writer you were at twenty-five, and that's evidence of living, not inconsistency.

I think the reason daily writing matters for voice is simple: you can't hear yourself in a room full of noise. And if you only write once a week, every session starts noisy. You spend the first hour clearing away the static, trying to remember what you sound like. Write every day and you pick up closer to where you left off. The signal stays warm.


Daily writing is how you keep the frequency clear. A short prompt each morning, something to write toward, can be enough to hold the thread.

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Kia Orion

Author of The Writer's Daily Practice, the #1 Bestselling book in Journal Writing and Writing Skills. He writes a free daily reflection for writers.

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