Creative Writing

Creative Writing Tips from the Writers Who Figured It Out

Kia Orion | | 9 min read

Most creative writing tips get compressed until they're useless. "Read more." "Write every day." "Show, don't tell." These aren't wrong, exactly. They're just too thin to act on. They're bumper stickers where you needed a manual.

"Read more" is advice, sure. But it doesn't tell you what to do differently tomorrow morning than you did yesterday. It doesn't tell you how to read, what to pay attention to, or what you're looking for when you find it. A real tip changes behavior. It gives you a move you can make, not just a direction to face.

What follows are five things that consistently show up in the working habits of writers whose creative writing lasted. Not writers who published one thing and disappeared. Writers who kept going for decades, who got better as they went, who left behind enough work that you can watch them figure it out in real time. These aren't rules. They're patterns observed across enough careers that they're worth taking seriously. Some of them will feel obvious. That's fine. Obvious and practiced are very different things.


1. Read the way a carpenter looks at a house

Every tips list tells you to read more. Fine. But reading more, by itself, is like telling someone who wants to learn to cook that they should eat more. Consumption isn't study. Study is what happens when you slow down enough to notice the decisions someone else made.

Francine Prose wrote an entire book about this called Reading Like a Writer, and the core argument is deceptively simple: read a sentence, then ask yourself why it works. Not whether you liked it. Why it worked. What did the verb do? Where did the writer break the line? Why did the paragraph end there and not two sentences later?

Stephen King put it more bluntly in On Writing: "If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time or the tools to write." But what King actually describes in that book isn't passive reading. He talks about absorbing the rhythms of other people's prose until those rhythms start to inform his own. He's reading the way a musician listens to a song, hearing the structure underneath the melody.

Virginia Woolf kept reading journals where she annotated what other writers did well and what they didn't. She'd read a novel and then write several paragraphs dissecting the author's approach to time, or dialogue, or physical description. She wasn't reviewing the book. She was reverse-engineering it.

Here's the practical version. Next time a sentence stops you, makes you re-read it because it's so good, don't just enjoy it. Copy it out by hand. Then ask three questions: What surprised me? What's the structure doing? Could I have written this, and if not, why not?

And when a story loses you, when you realize you've been skimming for two pages, go back and find the exact paragraph where your attention broke. That paragraph is a lesson. Something happened there, some choice the writer made, that let you drift. Knowing what that choice was is more useful than a hundred general principles about "keeping the reader engaged."

This habit of reading-as-study is one of the forces that shapes your writing voice. You don't develop a voice by trying to sound like yourself. You develop one by paying close enough attention to other writers that their best instincts gradually become yours.


2. Write with the door closed, rewrite with the door open

This is Stephen King's phrase, straight from On Writing, and it's one of those pieces of advice that sounds like a metaphor until you try it and realize it's almost literal.

Writing with the door closed means the first draft is private. Nobody's reading it. You're not performing. You're not writing a sentence and then immediately asking whether it's good enough, whether your workshop group would flag it, whether some future reader would be confused by paragraph three. You're just getting the thing down.

Anne Lamott calls this the shitty first draft in Bird by Bird, and the name itself is the lesson. The first draft is supposed to be bad. That's its job. If you're trying to write a good first draft, you're doing two things at once, creating and evaluating, and the evaluating will strangle the creating every single time. It's like trying to drive and read a map simultaneously, before GPS, when maps were unwieldy and you had to pull over to make sense of them.

Natalie Goldberg comes at the same idea from a different angle in Writing Down the Bones. She calls the raw material "first thoughts," and her whole method is about getting to those first thoughts before your internal editor wakes up and starts making everything sound reasonable. First thoughts are weird. They're specific in ways you wouldn't choose if you were being careful. That's what makes them valuable.

The practical action is almost embarrassingly simple. Make your drafting environment physically different from your editing environment. Write your first draft in a different font. Or a different program entirely. Or on paper, if you can stand it. The point is to create a neurological boundary, a signal to your brain that says: this is the part where we make a mess. The part where we clean it up comes later.

When you come back to rewrite, open the door. Now you're thinking about the reader. Now you're asking whether the thing makes sense, whether the structure holds, whether you've earned the ending. But you can only ask those questions productively if you have raw material to work with. And the raw material comes from writing with the door closed.


3. The specific detail does the emotional work

Anton Chekhov wrote a letter to his brother Alexander that contains maybe the single most useful piece of creative writing advice ever committed to paper. I'm paraphrasing, but the gist is this: don't tell me the moonlight is shining. Show me the glint of light on broken glass, and I'll know the moonlight for myself.

That's the whole principle. Abstraction is the enemy of feeling. When you write "she was sad," the reader processes the word "sad" and moves on. There's nothing to see, nothing to feel, nothing to remember. But when you write what sadness looked like in that specific body in that specific room, when you describe her pressing her thumb into the edge of the table hard enough to leave a mark, or staring at a coffee cup that's been sitting there long enough for a film to form on the surface, the reader doesn't just understand sadness. They experience something close to it.

Flannery O'Connor said it differently in Mystery and Manners: "The fiction writer has to realize that he can't create compassion with compassion, or emotion with emotion." You can't make someone feel something by telling them to feel it. You have to build the physical scene so precisely that the feeling arises on its own.

Raymond Carver understood this as well as anyone. Look at what happens in "Cathedral," where the narrator, a man who can't express emotion through language, ends up drawing a cathedral with his hand placed on top of a blind man's hand, and in that specific physical act, something shifts. Carver doesn't tell you what changed. He doesn't need to. The detail does the work.

I don't know what to make of why this is so consistently hard for writers, even experienced ones. It should be easy. You know that concrete details are better than abstractions. You've heard this advice a dozen times. And yet in the middle of a draft, the pull toward the abstract is enormous, because abstractions feel safe and the specific detail always feels like a risk, like you're revealing too much or getting too particular for the reader to follow. But the risk is the point. Our creative writing exercises include several that train this specific skill, because it's the kind of thing you have to practice repeatedly before it becomes instinct.

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4. Constraints are more useful than freedom

The blank page with no rules is the hardest writing situation that exists. People think freedom helps creativity. Mostly it doesn't. Mostly it paralyzes.

Georges Perec, a French novelist associated with the Oulipo movement, wrote an entire novel, A Void, without using the letter "e." The whole book. No letter "e." In French, where the letter "e" is arguably even more essential than it is in English. And the novel works as genuine fiction, with characters and emotion and narrative momentum. The constraint forced Perec into sentence constructions and word choices he never would have found if he'd had the full alphabet available to him.

Hemingway's famous terseness didn't come from a philosophical commitment to minimalism. It came from journalism. He wrote for newspapers that charged by the word for cable transmission, so he learned to strip sentences to the bone because it was literally cheaper. The constraint preceded the style. The art came from the limitation, not despite it.

Dorothea Brande, whose Becoming a Writer was published in 1934 and still holds up with startling clarity, prescribed time-pressure exercises decades before anyone had a name for free writing. Write for fifteen minutes first thing in the morning. Don't stop. Don't re-read. The clock is the constraint, and the time pressure is what keeps the internal editor from taking over, which connects back to writing with the door closed but attacks the problem from a different direction.

This is why free writing works. The only constraint is the clock, and that's enough. You'd think removing all constraints would make writing easier, more open, more creative. But the opposite is consistently true, and I think it's because constraints give you something to push against, and the pushing is where the interesting stuff happens. A word count forces you to cut. A form forces you to rearrange. A time limit forces you to choose your first instinct instead of deliberating for twenty minutes. And your first instinct, more often than not, is better than whatever you'd have deliberated your way into.

Try this: pick a piece you're working on and cut it by a third. Not by trimming. By removing entire sections and then rewriting the transitions. What survives will almost always be stronger than the original.


5. Show up before you feel ready

William Stafford wrote a poem every single morning before dawn. He did this for decades. Someone once asked him what he did when the writing wasn't going well, when the poems weren't any good. He said he lowered his standards.

That's not a joke. That's the method.

Flannery O'Connor sat at her desk for two hours every morning, no exceptions. She didn't wait until she felt like writing. She didn't wait for an idea. She sat down, and if nothing came, she sat there anyway, because the practice was the sitting, not the producing. Toni Morrison wrote before dawn while she was working full time as an editor at Random House and raising two children on her own, and there's a thing that happens when I think about Morrison's schedule where I start to wonder how many aspiring writers, myself included on certain weeks, have convinced themselves they don't have time when what they really don't have is a routine, and the routine is the thing that makes the time appear because you stop waiting for a perfect open window and just use the imperfect one you've got.

Octavia Butler wrote daily while working minimum-wage jobs, temp positions, jobs that left her exhausted. She wrote on buses. She wrote at night. She wrote a note to herself that's been widely photographed: "I shall be a bestselling writer... I will find the way to do this." She didn't have ideal conditions. She had a practice.

The practical action here is small enough that you might dismiss it, and I hope you won't. Pick a time. Set it ten minutes earlier than you think you can manage. Write for ten minutes. Don't plan what you'll write. Don't prepare. Just sit down and move your hand or your fingers and see what comes out. That's the whole system.

You won't feel ready. That's normal. Stafford didn't feel ready every morning either. He just lowered his standards enough to begin, and then he was writing, and once he was writing, the readiness caught up. This is the foundation of the daily writing practice approach. Not talent, not inspiration. A time and a chair.


These five tips all point in the same direction. The writers who got better at creative writing had a practice. They showed up, they read with attention, they wrote inside constraints, and they revised with honesty. None of them waited for the muse. None of them relied on talent alone. They built systems, small ones, sometimes just ten minutes before dawn, and the systems carried them through the years when talent and motivation weren't enough.

The common thread looks less like discipline and more like respect for the work. Believing that creative writing is a thing you get better at, not a thing you either can or can't do. Every writer in this piece, from Chekhov to Butler, treated writing as a practice. Something you return to, again and again, with attention and humility and a willingness to lower your standards enough to start.

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Kia Orion

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