Creative Writing

Creative Writing Exercises That Actually Work

Kia Orion | | 6 min read

Raymond Carver had no desk. For most of his thirties, he was working dead-end jobs, raising two kids with his first wife, living in houses too small and too loud to write in. His stories got drafted in the car while the kids napped, on breaks at the mill, in fifteen-minute windows between everything else. No quiet room, no uninterrupted afternoon, no fantasy writer's retreat. What he had was a car seat and maybe twenty minutes and a legal pad balanced on the steering wheel.

His constraints didn't damage his work. They shaped it. The compression in his sentences, that quality of saying almost nothing while meaning everything, came from working in a form that couldn't sustain excess. You don't linger in a subordinate clause when you've got twelve minutes left before the kids wake up. You cut to what matters because you have no other choice.

Most creative writing exercises get this backwards. They're designed to open up space, to give writers permission, to say "write anything you want about a memory from childhood." The problem was never a shortage of permission. The problem is almost always the opposite: too much room, and no pressure to focus. The exercises that actually work are the ones that take room away. A few worth keeping:

1. Cut the first paragraph off something you've already written.

This comes from Chekhov. In letters to his brother Aleksandr, he returned to the same observation so many times it became a kind of doctrine: stories almost always begin too early. The writer is warming up in the first paragraph, explaining the territory before entering it, telling the reader what they're about to experience rather than simply generating the experience. Cut it, Chekhov said, and the story nearly always starts stronger.

It's worth trying on something you've already written. Take a scene, a story, an essay. Delete the entire first paragraph and read what remains from the new opening sentence. Ask one thing: did anything important disappear? In most cases the answer is no. The first paragraph was telling you what the story was about. The second paragraph was the story itself.

What makes this useful is that it's not about inspiration. It's diagnostic. You're not producing something new, you're revealing what was already there underneath the scaffolding you built to get started. Most writers discover their actual opening was buried one paragraph down, sometimes two. The warming-up material felt necessary while they were writing it because they needed it to find their way in. The reader doesn't need any of that, and usually doesn't want it. Chekhov cut opening and closing paragraphs from almost everything he wrote, and said the same thing about endings: the last paragraph usually explains what the story meant. Cut it and the meaning hits harder, because the reader supplies it themselves.

Do this once and you'll start second-guessing your openings before you even finish a draft. That's the point.

2. Write a scene with no punctuation to hear the rhythm.

Ursula K. Le Guin included this in Steering the Craft, her 1998 book on the elements of fiction. The instruction is simple: write 300 to 500 words of a scene, no punctuation at all, no periods or commas, no quotation marks, no apostrophes. Just words in sequence, with line breaks where you absolutely need them and nothing else.

What happens without punctuation is that the only tool left to guide the reader through a sentence is word order and sound. The prose has to carry itself. Writers who do this exercise once start hearing their own rhythm differently, and most of them don't like what they find. Sentences turn out to be nearly identical in length. The variation that felt present on the page vanishes when the punctuation is stripped. You realize you've been using commas and periods to create pauses and emphases that a better-built sentence would generate on its own.

I'm not entirely sure why stripping punctuation reveals this so clearly, but it does. Something about seeing all the words running together makes the repetition of the underlying patterns impossible to ignore. Short clause, long clause, comma, short clause. When you restore the punctuation after the exercise, you write it differently.

3. Describe a place through someone who hates it.

Carver's stories are built from environments rendered through people for whom those environments are a kind of trap. Kitchens. Trailer parks. The waiting rooms of hospitals. The places in his fiction are almost always described by people who don't want to be in them, and that friction is what generates the specificity. You can't be vague when you're resentful. Resentment notices things.

The exercise: pick a location you know well. Write about it from the perspective of someone who finds it suffocating, or wrong, or beneath them. The one rule is that you can't use any adjectives that name the feeling directly. Nothing like "depressing" or "claustrophobic" or "grim." Only physical details that imply the feeling. The peeling linoleum. The particular sound of the ventilation. The way the light comes through a frosted window at four in the afternoon.

This is how show-don't-tell actually works in practice, not as a rule you apply after writing, but as a constraint you build into the exercise itself. Telling is what happens when you run out of specifics. The constraint forces you to stay specific because the concrete detail is the only tool available.

A secondary thing happens too: the narrator's character comes through in what they notice. Two different people in the same kitchen will see entirely different things. The character's attention is the character.

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4. Write the scene you've been avoiding.

Carver wrote "Cathedral" in 1981, after a stretch where almost nothing came. The story, about a blind man visiting the home of a sighted man who quietly resents him, came out in one sitting. He later said he wrote it in a state where he had no agenda, no plan for what it should mean. He went toward a situation that made him uncomfortable and kept going until he found out what was there.

Most writers, when they're stuck on a project, are circling a scene they don't want to write. They write the one before it. The one after it. The flashback that explains how the characters got here. What they're avoiding is the actual confrontation, the moment where something irreversible happens, or where the writer has to commit to something that can't be walked back.

The exercise: look at whatever you're currently working on and identify the scene you've been writing around. Write it before you feel ready. Stephen King talks about something similar in On Writing, writing toward the most frightening image rather than away from it. The avoidance is the signal. Writers avoid scenes for the same reason readers remember them: they carry the highest emotional charge in the material.

It helps to write it badly on purpose, to give yourself permission to produce a rough draft of the hard scene with no intention of keeping the draft. The goal isn't to nail it. The goal is to stop circling and find out what's actually in there. Usually it's less terrifying than you thought, and more honest than anything you wrote while you were avoiding it.

5. Rewrite a scene you love by someone else in your own voice.

Zadie Smith described her early years as a writer in her essay collection Changing My Mind as a period of imitation so close it was nearly plagiarism. She typed out pages of Kafka at the keyboard to feel how his sentences moved, not to deceive anyone, but to understand how the thing was made. It's how painters learned, standing in front of a Vermeer with a canvas, trying to reproduce the light not to sell it as their own but to feel the decisions that produced it.

The exercise: find a scene from a writer you genuinely love, one page at most. Rewrite it as yourself. Keep the events and the sequence exactly as they are. Change everything else: the diction, the rhythm, the level of interiority, the sentence length. When you're done, put both versions side by side.

The gap between them is your current voice. Where you simplified what the original complicated, where you pushed into interiority that the original kept exterior, where your rhythms broke away from theirs and started doing something different, that's where you are as a writer right now. Most people are surprised by how much of their own voice shows up even when they're trying to imitate someone else. The imitation is a container you keep filling with yourself.

Do it with writers whose work is very different from each other and you'll start to understand what you're drawn to and why. The comparison at the end is where the actual learning happens, not the imitation itself but the gap it reveals.


These exercises are worth doing once. They're worth considerably more if you do them regularly, one per week as part of a writing session, treating them less like creative experiments and more like the kind of drill that athletes run because repetition builds a physical habit. A 15-minute session with a real constraint beats an hour of waiting to feel ready, every time.

The constraint is the point. Carver's car windows, Chekhov's editorial knife, Le Guin's stripped punctuation. They all come from the same understanding: pressure forces attention, and attention is what good prose is actually made of.

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Kia Orion

Author of The Writer's Daily Practice, the #1 Bestselling book in Journal Writing and Writing Skills. He writes a free daily reflection for writers.

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